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hey prissy. im sorry i couldnt post earlier.
but it helped me to accumulate a bigger part of your story and read them all at once. hehe.
and i think youre very successful with your "pencil". youve got some grammatical mistakes, but they could be straightened out by an editor in one sweep.
i especially like the way you go into psychological depths abt why your protagonist behaves the way she does. im looking forward to the rest of it.
but it helped me to accumulate a bigger part of your story and read them all at once. hehe.
and i think youre very successful with your "pencil". youve got some grammatical mistakes, but they could be straightened out by an editor in one sweep.
i especially like the way you go into psychological depths abt why your protagonist behaves the way she does. im looking forward to the rest of it.
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