Her stories are very good, her biggest problem is writers block. I have seen the end of the story, and the way she ended it, I do believe she will do as she said, and create a second short story, to go along with it. I am proud of her talents.
I think you will like the next part. I would like to know where she got the idea of metal brackets. She won't tell me. But that would most definitely keep a person in one place.
Actually no. I struggle with my english. But two things have helped me increase my grammatical comings. 1 the computer tells me when I spell, or use wrong grammar, and 2, Master helps me puut it in good working order.